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--Revenge--Part II by ~AiaNP:iconAiaNP:

Categories Manga/Anime > Traditional Media > Doujnshi (fan-comics) > Panels

©2006-2009 ~AiaNP
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The product of a feverish mind. . . . GO MU! =D

Please excuse Puppy-Mu in the bottom-right corner ^^; . I was at a loss for what to draw there so I started drawing random expressions . . . and I didnt have the 'heart' to erase this one.

This is a sequel, you could say, to my earlier comic [link] . . . Mu had to get Kira back sometime, right?
This is just one of the many ways. . . . :plotting:

Can you read my handwriting? Sorry. Tell me if you cant, okay? It's quite understandable . . . especially since I sized the image down . . . it might be a bit difficult . . . ^^;

Hmmm, it seems a bit too curly for Mu when he speaks . . . does it seem that way to you? :? ((Come to think of it, it's probably too curly for Kira too . . . ))

Anyways . . . I've been home, sick, for a while--borderline pneumonia. So what do I do to pass the time? This of course. I finished this several days ago, actually. I didnt put it up 'til now because I had left one panel blank--since I was unable to draw it. Try and guess which one that was--it's one of the worst, I think. =D

Oddly, I like my first comic over this one, only because with this--though the idea was a nice one, turning it into reality did nothing for my stress level. . . . I kept making mistakes! *Especially* during the inking stage. I messed up several okay panels just on inking. It looked so much nicer pre-inking, but hey--what can I seriously do about it, eh?
Then come the hands. Usually I avoid hands as much as possible . . . I have reason to. I cant do them for life. This comic, though, involved hands a lot so my troubles came with those too. . . .

All-in-all I actually *like* this latest "doodle" of mine . . . Never been too good at comics, yet I've drawn something half-resembling one!!

My Final Count: [Things I actually like how they're drawn]
Hands: 1 (yes, *one* hand out of many)
Kiras: 2.5
Mus: 4

Gah--I have so much trouble drawing the same thing over and over again! Mu and Kira change so much panel to panel . . . especially Mu . . . o.O

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Pencil sketch, inked, cleaned up, penciled-in tones and slight digital alters via MSPaint

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Enjoy?

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~WingedRider Dec 9, 2006, 8:50:59 AM
First to comment! *giggle* FUNNY!!!

I like the openning of the soda can. Nice. :evillaugh:
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Mood: Lmao =MapleRose Dec 9, 2006, 9:15:03 AM
:lmao: :giggle:

Go Mwu!! :highfive:!

Ah sweet sweet revenge :evillaugh: ...

You know, Mwu sounded like a salesman there when he's convincing Kira to open the can... I bet he'd make a great con artist :XD: I think that's my fave part, because it sounds just like something Mwu would say :aww:

hehe, my fave panel though has to be the one on the bottom left corner, with him looking so innocent (and sparklies around him), and then the next panel with Kira looking so angry :XD:... Hmm, I'd be careful if I were Mwu... would this be the start of a prank war? ;)

Ah, nice job on the hands. and I like those panels with Kira opening the can, very suspenseful with the zoomed-in shots. and you're a whole lot better at paneling than I am ^^;

Nice toning job too, I esp like how you did Kira's hair with the pencil :)

--
"When life gives you lemons, find someone you despise and squirt them in the eye!"


~mabudachi-trio ~Mwu-x-Murrue
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~bake-neko Dec 9, 2006, 7:33:42 PM
:lmao:

That was soooo funny. :lol: Mwu sure knows how to get revenge. Mwu can be so naughty.

I'm sorry to hear that you're sick. I hope you get well soon.
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~jdiam Dec 13, 2006, 1:23:46 PM
Haha, poor Kira. Awesome. :)
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